Slice of writing Blog #4

Feb 02 2009

Slice of writing Blog #4

Published by Jables at 8:04 am under Uncategorized

Two weeks ago me and my father were at my grandmother’s funeral when I asked him a question ” Are you sure your alright.” He looked at me. At that moment I saw a different part of him. Icould see there was a part of him that was gone,empty,missing. You could tell he wanted to stay strong for me and our family but he just couldn’t. Just then I hit me;I have never seen my dad cry and at that moment that he looked at me a tear rolled down his cheek. To me he looked like a little kid again. One stranded in a store alone crying for his mommy. Then he hugged me and told me how much he loves me.

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# christiana04on 14 Feb 2009 at 11:31 pm

I liked this so much!
It makes me think of my dad and how much i miss him.
I’m really sorry for your loss.

i hope your family is doing better.